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Lectures 1, 2, 10 Open book · 2 hours · 50% Dr Paul O'Connell

Snapshot

This page is the connective tissue for your five topic notes. It records (i) the exam mechanics, (ii) the answer structure the lecturer requires, and (iii) the foundational theory — Dembour, Moyn, Mutua, Okafor, O'Connell, Marks, Brown — that you will weave into any answer to lift it from a 2:1 to a First. The five topic notes already contain topic-specific cases and theorists; this page is what you reach for in the first ten minutes of reading-and-planning, not while writing.

1. The exam at a glance

The Lecture 10 slides set the parameters precisely. The exam counts for 50% of the final grade. It runs for two hours. It is open book. You answer one question from a choice of five. Each question is a statement or provocation followed by "discuss". The five questions correspond to the five examinable topics flagged in Lecture 10: the UN system, the African system, the right to housing, inequality, and corporations.

Open-book is not a licence to copy — it is a licence to verify. Use it for accurate quotations and case citations, not to read in for the first time. The lecturer warns explicitly (Slide 20): "Do not copy out long passages. Do not go down a rabbit hole." Plan with your closed notes; reach for the book only to check.

Slide 12 spells out what the exam is testing. It is not a test of recall. It is a test of structured thinking, critical analysis, and evidence-based arguments. The corollary in Slide 19 lists the four most expensive mistakes: description without critical argument; assertions without evidence; sitting on the fence; failing to adopt and justify a position. Take the lecturer at his word — he is the marker.

2. FRAME → EXPLAIN → CRITIQUE → EVALUATE → CONCLUDE

Slide 18 prescribes the five-stage structure your answer must follow. Treat each as a section of your essay, ideally signposted with a heading or topic-sentence:

  1. FRAME — name the debate. State why the question matters. Locate it in the broader course themes (state sovereignty vs universalism; CPRs vs SERs; empire vs HR; promise vs practice). One paragraph is enough; do not waste time on background.
  2. EXPLAIN — set out the legal architecture: treaties, articles, General Comments, leading cases. This is the descriptive backbone. Be precise about citations (article numbers, year, paragraph numbers in GCs). Aim for accuracy, not exhaustiveness.
  3. CRITIQUE — apply the academic literature: Dembour, Mutua, Moyn, Okafor, Marks, Salomon, O'Connell, etc. This is where most of your marks live. Push beyond "limitations exist" — name the specific structural critique, attribute it to its author, and quote where you can.
  4. EVALUATE — adopt a position. Say your view, in your voice, and justify it from the law and the literature you've just deployed. The lecturer's preferred answer-line is rarely a binary "succeeds / fails" — it is usually a "necessary but insufficient" or "monitoring not enforcement" reading. But the position must be yours: argued, not merely echoed.
  5. CONCLUDE — wrap up by restating your position, summarising the key step in your reasoning, and gesturing at what would change the picture (a binding treaty, real political mobilisation, structural reform). Avoid empty rhetorical flourishes.

3. Dembour's four schools — your theoretical baseline

Marie-Bénédicte Dembour's article "What Are Human Rights? Four Schools of Thought" (2010) 32 Human Rights Quarterly 1 is the indispensable map of how scholars conceive human rights. Knowing the four schools lets you place any author or argument on a grid, and gives you a ready vocabulary for the FRAME and EVALUATE stages.

"The natural school conceives of human rights as given; the deliberative school, as agreed upon; the protest school, as fought for; and the discourse school, as talked about." — Marie-Bénédicte Dembour, "What Are Human Rights? Four Schools of Thought" (2010) 32 HRQ 1

Use Dembour to FRAME any essay: state which school the question's premise belongs to, then signal that you will engage critique from one of the others. A protest-school answer to a UN-system question, for instance, foregrounds civil society agency over institutional architecture — an instantly distinctive opening.

4. Moyn and the historical critique

Samuel Moyn's The Last Utopia: Human Rights in History (2010) reset the field by arguing that "human rights" as a global, individualist, anti-statist movement is a recent invention — substantially a product of the late 1970s, not 1948. The 1948 UDHR was, on his reading, a thin document overshadowed by decolonisation and welfare-statism, and only became the foundational text decades later as Cold-War ideologies collapsed and human rights filled the empty utopian space.

"Human rights crystallised in the 1970s, seemingly from nowhere." — Samuel Moyn, The Last Utopia: Human Rights in History (Harvard UP, 2010)

His follow-up, Not Enough: Human Rights in an Unequal World (2018), pursues the structural payoff: the human-rights revolution coincided with — and is structurally compatible with — the post-1979 explosion of global inequality, because rights set a "minimum floor" without specifying a "ceiling". Both books are essential for the inequality topic; The Last Utopia also informs any answer that asks about the foundations or trajectory of the regime.

5. TWAIL: Mutua, Okafor, Anghie

Third-World Approaches to International Law (TWAIL) is the central post-colonial critique of human rights. It argues that the regime, despite its universalist self-image, encodes the priorities and worldview of the global North, and reproduces colonial hierarchies under the language of rights. Three names you must be able to deploy:

"The grand narrative of human rights contains a subtext that depicts an epochal contest pitting savages, on the one hand, against victims and saviors, on the other." — Makau Mutua, "Savages, Victims, and Saviors" (2001) 42 Harv Int'l LJ 201, 201–02

6. Marxist & critical voices: O'Connell, Marks, Brown

The course's lecturer is Paul O'Connell. His scholarly profile is broadly Marxist-aligned; his book Vindicating Socio-Economic Rights: International Standards and Comparative Experiences (Routledge, 2012) is the obvious anchor. He argues that socio-economic rights have been hollowed out by progressive realisation, judicial deference, and the structural compatibility of HR with neoliberalism — but that they remain valuable as a floor, especially when articulated and defended by social movements rather than litigated alone.

"Human rights are inescapably political: they are constituted by, and operate within, structures of power; they cannot be the answer to questions they cannot pose." — Paul O'Connell, "On the Human Rights Question" (2018) 40 HRQ 962

Susan Marks, in "Human Rights and Root Causes" (2011) 74 MLR 57, develops the related charge that human rights law tends to treat violations as discrete events requiring responses, and so leaves untouched the political-economic structures that plan the misery in the first place. Her phrase "planned misery" travels well as a critique-stage anchor, especially in inequality and corporate-power answers.

Wendy Brown, "'The Most We Can Hope For…': Human Rights and the Politics of Fatalism" (2004) 103 South Atlantic Quarterly 451, captures the post-political, fatalistic ideology in which "rights talk" has become a substitute for transformative politics. Drop her in for the EVALUATE stage when you want to suggest that the regime's success is also its limit.

Other names to keep within reach: Costas Douzinas (The End of Human Rights, 2000) — sceptical, post-Marxist; Margot Salomon on extraterritorial obligations and global poverty; Sandra Fredman on substantive (four-dimensional) equality; Philip Alston on neoliberalism and HR (his UK 2018 and "neoliberalism" 2020 reports are gold).

7. Cross-cutting course themes (Slide 5)

The lecturer flags four themes that recur across the syllabus. Use them in the FRAME stage to show you grasp the architecture, not just the details.

8. Common mistakes (Slide 19) — and how to avoid them

Description without argument. Listing what the UPR does, or what GC4 says, without arguing about whether it works. Fix: end every paragraph with an evaluative sentence ("This matters because…", "But this is constrained by…").
Assertions without evidence. "The UN system is failing" — by what measure? compared to what? Fix: every assertion needs a case, a quote, or a concrete example. Pull the case-boxes from your topic note.
Sitting on the fence. "There are arguments on both sides…" — yes, and your job is to weigh them. Fix: take a position in the snapshot and earn it through the body.
Encyclopaedic dumping. The open-book temptation. Fix: structure first, content second. Slides 21–22: "Structure and judgment > encyclopaedic knowledge."

9. Time management for the two-hour open-book exam

  1. 0–5 min. Read all five questions. Read each twice. Choose your topic on (a) which question you can argue best, not (b) which you have memorised most. The lecturer's express advice: "Focus on topics you enjoyed/were engaged by" (Slide 15).
  2. 5–15 min. Plan. Write the five-stage skeleton (FRAME / EXPLAIN / CRITIQUE / EVALUATE / CONCLUDE) on rough paper with your three or four key cases and three or four key theorists slotted in. Decide your position before you start drafting.
  3. 15–100 min. Write, in the order of your plan, with one paragraph per sub-section. Reach for the open book only to verify a quotation or article number — not to read in.
  4. 100–115 min. Re-read the question and your answer. Tighten the conclusion so it directly answers the question's verb ("discuss" → here is my answer). Add citations you missed.
  5. 115–120 min. Final read-through for typos and clarity. Submit.

10. Final exam-day checklist